Tuesday, July 01, 2014

lucky numbers


main character
other character
setting
problem
2
1
6
3
Jack
Giant
castle
the giant stolen something from jack




Once upon a time there were two people named Jack and the Giant, who lived in their castles.  But something went wrong, the Giant  stole a golden egg from Jack. Jack got really mad so they started to fight. The giant stormed off with Jack’s golden egg.  Then the Giant came running back to Jack and came to say sorry for stealing your golden egg. Jack said it is ok.
But suddenly there were the three little evil pigs and they had flaming ears and evil red eyes. The giant and Jack got their  flaming sword and they battled the three evil pigs. They had a sharp stick each and they charged and then the giant just stepped  on the pigs and that was the end of their life.


Jack hopped on the giant’s back and entered the forest to look for some food  and saw a person who was  on a horse.  He was a knight with long hair and he was wearing shiny golden armour.  Jack said “can we follow you?” the knight said “ok you can, but you can't follow me all the way”. Jack said  “Ok.”

But then the big bad wolf came. Jack went on the giants back and the giant ran for their life. Then Jack yelled to the giant “go and kill the big bad wolf!”.  So the Giant sprinted towards the wolf  and squashed it.



Then they saw a house in the middle of the forest at a clearing. The sun was shining on the smoke coming out of the chimney. Jack knocked on the door and an old lady said “ What do you want?” “We just want something to eat for the road so we don't  starve.”  “ok, you can have some candy.”Thank You!” said the Giant.


Then they headed off.  Then the saw  donald the duck in this pond having his bath. Jack asked “are you having a nice bath there?” donald the duck said “yes i am”.  Then giant and Jack went to their castle and they lived happily ever after.

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